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Greg McLean

171 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I appreciate some of the comments the member has put on the record. I think in terms of the prairie provinces and the province of British Columbia. If we take a look at the Prime Minister and the government as a whole, working with the other jurisdictions, I believe we can see that there is a great sense of collaboration. People out west are appreciative. They see the collaboration that is taking place. There is a very strong sense of optimism, whether it is in resource development or in many other common interests that we have in western Canada and even going up north. I wonder if the member could provide his thoughts in regard to the collaboration that is taking place today and has taken place over the last number of months, which is really leading to a great deal of optimism out west.”
Statement grade
A
Average 93 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 20%Reasoning 59%The ask 13%Promise 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 28 wordsthere is a memorandum of understanding that some provincial governments say is a change in direction in the Liberal government but a change in direction on paper only.1 Reasoning · 31 wordsWhen we actually analyze that paper, as many of us have, we see that those changes in direction are not clear enough to actually indicate that people want to invest here. The ask · 22 wordsAsk the private sector entities that are impacted by those announcements and those words on paper that the government has put forward. Claims · 6 wordsIt is still not committing capital. Reasoning · 61 wordsThe reason it is not is that there is no clarity about the outcome for the process they have to go through. Getting infrastructure built in Canada requires an onerous process in which the companies involved, large companies, have to spend more time, resources and money going through the process than they actually have to spend putting the infrastructure in place. Promise · 4 wordsThat has to change.Vague promise Reasoning · 9 wordsThe process cannot be the only thing that matters. Promise · 10 wordsWe have to get things built in this country again.Partly on point

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