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Greg McLean

135 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Dan Muys (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, that was an excellent speech. Eleven years ago, Canada had the best-performing economy in the G7 and the OECD. After 11 years of the Liberals and their disastrous policies, we are the only G7 country in recession, and we have the lowest private sector investment of any economy in the OECD. What would Conservatives do to close the gap the member talked about, in terms of the immense resource wealth we have, and the smart people, yet poor results?”
Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 4%Anecdote 9%Procedure 6%Promise 59%Claims 6%Reasoning 16%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 6 wordsthat actually was an excellent question, ThanksAnecdote · 12 wordsbecause people ask me all the time, “What would you do differently?”Anecdote Procedure · 8 wordsI think we need to be very clear.Procedure Promise · 62 wordsWe would make sure that those rules are very clear, unlike the muddled rules we keep coming up with where we are talking out of one side of our mouth to this group of people and the other side of our mouth to another group of people.Vague promise There will be clarity about how we get through process quickly and sustainably in Canada.Vague promise Claims · 8 wordsThat is something every investor is looking for. Reasoning · 21 wordsWhat is the process? How long will it take? When can they start building and get a return on their investment? Promise · 18 wordsThat has to be clear to all investors, all proponents, in getting things done in Canada once again.

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