Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 47%Anecdote 22%Thanks 18%Promise 14%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 74 wordsthis week we celebrate National AccessAbility Week, which began in 1988.1Inspired by Rick Hansen’s Man in Motion World Tour, this week honours the contributions of Canadians with disabilities and reminds us that we can always build a more inclusive and accessible society.This year’s Canadian theme is “Building a Strong, Accessible Canada.”2More than eight million Canadians face barriers in everyday life.3Many of these obstacles are built into our homes and workplaces.Anecdote · 35 wordsAs the father of a son with a disability, and a friend of Rick Hansen and of Canada’s first chief accessibility officer, Stephanie Cadieux, I have seen first-hand the importance of designing our communities equitably.4AnecdoteThanks · 28 wordsThis week, we celebrate the progress we have made so far and acknowledge the work of advocates whose leadership continues to break down barriers and inspire positive change.ThanksPromise · 22 wordsTogether, we can continue building communities where everyone can participate and thrive.Vague promiseLet us create a fair and welcoming society for everyone.