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Mandy Gull-Masty

94 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Jenny Kwan (NDP)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberal government has sidelined Bill S-2 as amended, despite a court-ordered deadline to end sex- and race-based discrimination and the second-generation cut-off in the Indian Act. The UN has called on Canada to fix this by adopting Bill S-2 as amended. The majority of first nations agree and do not want more consultation. Officials and ministers say it is up to the Prime Minister. Will the Prime Minister stop the delay tactics, meet with first nations women leaders, as requested, and pass Bill S-2 as amended, now, to end the discrimination and violations of the charter and international law?”
Statement grade
C+
66 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 77%Thanks 4%Promise 7%Reasoning 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 18 wordsI think the member is well aware that Bill S-2 is in front of the committee for study.1 Thanks · 4 wordsI welcome her input.Thanks Claims · 28 wordsWe are there to ensure that enfranchisement, the intention of the bill, is responded to.2Vague promise We continue to work closely with groups across the country, hearing their input.Vague promise Promise · 7 wordsI am open to supporting these communities, Reasoning · 11 wordsbecause enfranchisement quantifies who indigenous people are under the Indian Act. Claims · 26 wordsWe are trying to ensure that we remove the barriers of the Indian Act for first nations people in this country.Vague promise I am working on that.Partly on pointVague promise

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