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Ruby Sahota

83 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Gabriel Ste-Marie (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, we are discussing an important bill. I would like to know what my colleague thinks of the Barreau du Québec’s response to this bill. The Barreau du Québec agrees with the principles, but it has some reservations. It describes the objectives of protecting against gender-based violence, improving evidentiary procedures and modernizing criminal law as commendable. However, the Barreau du Québec believes that incorporating them into a single piece of legislation creates regulatory complexity that could hinder their analysis, review and practical application. Could the member comment on that?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
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Reasoning 46%Positioning 31%Claims 23%

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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 14 wordsit is important to talk to Crown counsel, advocates and members of the bar. Positioning · 21 wordsHowever, this government has a mandate to protect Canadians, and we are trying to pursue that mandate as quickly as possible.PositioningVague promise Claims · 8 wordsThere are other areas where we are investing, Vague promiseReasoning · 14 wordsbut it is crucial that we update our laws quickly and not stall anymore. Positioning · 5 wordsLives are on the line.Positioning Claims · 11 wordsWe heard it from the testimony that witnesses delivered before committee. Reasoning · 10 wordsIn my personal opinion, we should not be waiting anymore.Partly on point

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