“Mr. Speaker, I can tell my friend and colleague that I have always put the residents of Winnipeg North first regarding the issue of crime. The Prime Minister, in the last election, talked about how important it is that we have a higher sense of security, and this particular secretary of state, who has been dealing with crime, has brought forward and commented on a series of legislative changes that would make our communities safer in many ways. What I like about Bill C‑16 is that it would do such things as create strong national leadership on issues such as femicide. Bill C‑16 would reinstate a number of mandatory minimum penalties. The secretary of state has also been a very strong advocate through putting into place bills to deal with bail reform and other legislative needs. I would just like to get her thoughts on why it has been so important for the government to deal with the crime file in a very holistic fashion.”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 87 wordssince being elected last year in this new government, we have had a very ambitious agenda on that front.We have put forward approximately nine pieces of legislation that deal with different aspects of crime.1That is the most ambitious that any government has been in this Parliament.We are changing and updating the Criminal Code so that it keeps up with the issues that we are seeing in our communities, the issues that police are confronted with and the issues that victims are speaking out about.Positioning · 14 wordsWe are making sure that we are doing our part at the federal level.PositioningVague promiseReasoning · 44 wordsHowever, this issue is complex because it deals with different levels of government.As I stated in my speech as well, it is crucial to have provincial and territorial partners at the table and to make sure that they, too, are doing their part.Claims · 17 wordsI know that this issue is important to all of them because the premiers have raised it, Reasoning · 47 wordsso it will also be very, very important to make sure that cases are not dismissed, that Crown counsel pursues charges that are laid and that the necessary resources are provided at the provincial level in order for us to really see the results that Canadians expect.