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Judy A. Sgro

117 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Lisa Hepfner (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, my distinguished colleague has many years of service in the House. Perhaps she would reflect on the changes for women that she has seen in our legislation over that time.”
Statement grade
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89 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 65%Promise 35%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 76 wordsa ton of changes have happened, but they have all been too slow. It seems that it takes a long time to start to really understand some of the difficulties different people, women in particular, are facing. I am very proud of what has happened in the last 10 or 12 years as, really, women’s rights have been getting the attention they need as we all move forward collectively to ensure that women’s rights are protected. Promise · 41 wordsWe will make sure that women such as those I met a couple of weeks ago know that their government is concerned about them and will continue to move forward legislation that will better protect them and better protect our children.Vague promise

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