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Ryan Turnbull

120 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Brad Vis (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank the member for his response this evening. I am glad he raised the Montrose application. What is problematic is that when the court case commenced, it was only the City of Richmond and not the Government of Canada that explicitly made arguments in favour of fee simple land. Part of the uncertainty today is because the Government of Canada did not make those arguments or use the language that even the parliamentary secretary is using this evening in favour of property rights. My hope for British Columbia is that the Government of Canada revises its legal arguments with the opportunity from the Montrose application and stands firmly in favour of private property rights to move Canada’s economy forward and improve exports out of British Columbia, which are in question as a result of this case.”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Thanks 4%Claims 55%Positioning 8%Reasoning 7%Promise 26%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 5 wordsI appreciate the member’s concern.Thanks Claims · 39 wordsAs I said in the remarks I have given here tonight, we understand that the decision may cause uncertainty and concern for private landowners. People want to know what this means for their homes, their communities and their futures. Positioning · 10 wordsWe hear those concerns, and we take them very seriously.Positioning Reasoning · 8 wordsKeeping private property predictable and stable is fundamental, Promise · 12 wordsand we will advance all viable arguments in court to protect it.Vague promise Claims · 27 wordsOur goal is to advance reconciliation in a practical and responsible way that both respects indigenous rights and also gives property owners confidence and peace of mind.Vague promise Promise · 19 wordsWe will keep working collaboratively with all parties to the litigation and remain available to them throughout this process.Vague promise

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