“Madam Speaker, a few weeks ago, I rose in the House in support of Bill C-16, and today I rise again for the same reason. In Peel Region, every year, the police receive approximately 16,000 calls of family and intimate partner violence. That is 16,000 calls for help and 16,000 moments of fear. Can the minister speak to the importance of passing this legislation and how it will continue to protect the most vulnerable in our communities?”
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Madam Speaker, Thanks · 26 wordsI want to thank my colleague from Brampton Centre for her advocacy on this issue.She is right to point out the magnitude of this issue.ThanksClaims · 10 wordsIt is 16,000 people from her part of the country, 2Positioning · 5 wordsso 16,000 lives changed forever.PositioningClaims · 72 wordsWe have an opportunity to have the legal system intervene more forcefully and with a greater effect.In addition to some of the new infractions and more serious penalties that we put in place, we are also making significant changes to how courts deal with some of these changes.3Vague promiseLet us think about the fact that nearly 10,000 cases have been thrown out of courts for delay, including many sexual assault cases.1Positioning · 39 wordsWhen the complainant is forced to live in the same community as a perpetrator who is walking free in their community, not because they have defeated the charges but because time ran out, that does not feel like justice.PositioningReasoning · 12 wordsWe have an opportunity to correct things.This bill provides that opportunity.The ask · 6 wordsLet us vote for it today.