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Kristina Tesser Derksen

119 words · 4 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Frank Caputo (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is always a pleasure to rise on behalf of the people from Kamloops—Thompson—Nicola. I listened with great attention to my colleague’s speech, as the person who wrote the bill along and ushered the bill through to change the name of “child pornography“ to “child sexual abuse and exploitation material.” As somebody who prosecuted Internet luring and offences against children, I took a great deal of interest. One of the things the member spoke about was homicide of intimates, which was also addressed in Bill C-225, also known as Bailey’s law. Bailey’s law is at the Senate right now, and it was studied and amended substantially in the House at the request of the government. I wonder if that member would be prepared to provide an endorsement to state that Bailey’s law should be passed forthwith. Bailey McCourt, for whom the bill is named, was tragically killed in a similar situation to the Henderson murder the member spoke about. Her death happened on July 4 last year. Would the member support this bill coming into effect by July 4 this year?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
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Thanks 20%Claims 37%Promise 19%Reasoning 24%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsI thank my colleague very much for his advocacy and work on that bill.Thanks Claims · 44 wordsAs someone who has worked in the violence against women sector in the legal context, I know we saw gaps in laws and legislation that could be addressed through this House, and we are glad to see those types of bills moving through now. Promise · 7 wordsI am happy to continue to advocate, Vague promiseReasoning · 28 wordsand certainly it is our job as elected officials in this chamber to advocate on behalf of those who do not have voices to bring their stories forward.Partly on point Thanks · 10 wordsI commend the member for his work on that bill, ThanksPromise · 16 wordsand I will certainly continue to work with him to elevate those voices in this chamber.Partly on pointVague promise

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