Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, I am going to go back to lawful access. The Conservatives cannot have it both ways. They cannot say that they are going to fight and get tough on crime, but then, when we have police agencies and law enforcement agencies from across the country saying they want lawful access, be so determined to prevent the House of Commons, the Prime Minister and the government from passing lawful access. I ask the member to tell us the reason why.”
Statement grade
D–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 68. The grade is held to 44, 30 above Relevance.
44 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 10 wordsthe Conservative Party is the party of law and order, PositioningPartly on pointReasoning · 17 wordsand the key to the rule of law is that the government is also under the law.Claims · 49 wordsThis means that, when the government comes along and says it wants a sweep, it wants the private sector to hold all metadata, all of it, without a warrant, without any suspicion of a crime being committed, that would be a violation of the Charter of Rights and Freedoms.Off pointPromise · 17 wordsAs the party of law and order, we will defend the Canadian Charter of Rights and Freedoms.Partly on pointVague promiseProcedure · 4 wordsThat is the reason.Procedure