Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Jagsharan Singh Mahal

136 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
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Thanks 31%Claims 43%Reasoning 10%Positioning 10%Promise 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 26 wordsI rise today to recognize the incredible work of the Edmonton Police Service and other law enforcement agencies involved in a two-year-long national drug trafficking investigation.Thanks Claims · 41 wordsPolice seized approximately 80 kilograms of cocaine with a street value of more than $8 million, along with dangerous narcotics, ammunition and cash.1 This is a serious reminder of the organized crime networks bringing drugs, violence and fear into our communities. Thanks · 16 wordsI want to thank the officers who put themselves at risk to keep our streets safe.Thanks Reasoning · 14 wordsPolice cannot do this alone. They need a justice system that backs them up. Claims · 18 wordsAfter 11 years of Liberal soft-on-crime policies and Liberal bills like Bill C-5, our streets are more dangerous.2 Positioning · 14 wordsTo the police officers in Edmonton and across Canada, know that Conservatives support them.Positioning Promise · 7 wordsWe will keep fighting for safer communities.Vague promise

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