Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Shannon Miedema

154 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

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Greeting 16%Claims 67%Thanks 6%The ask 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 24 wordstoday I rise to recognize an exceptional Haligonian, someone who has had a long and storied career supporting some of our most vulnerable residents.Greeting Claims · 103 wordsSince 1985, Linda Wilson has dedicated her career to organizations that have significant community impact.1 From early career roles to senior leadership positions, and with over 40 years of service, her impact is lasting. She had five years at Adsum House, eight years with Phoenix Youth Programs, 16 years at HomeBridge Youth Society and now over 11 years as the CEO of Shelter Nova Scotia, 23where she is overseeing the charitable, not-for-profit organization that supports 1,500 Haligonians navigating times of crisis and transition through residential, trustee and outreach programs annually.4 This summer, Linda will officially step into her next chapter, 5which is retirement. Thanks · 10 wordsI wish her all the best and some much-deserved rest.Thanks The ask · 17 wordsOn behalf of all Haligonians, I ask the members of the House to celebrate this remarkable woman.

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