“Mr. Speaker, here is what real people are facing, as described in a message from Matis, a young Quebecker who wrote to me this week: I just wanted to tell you that many of my generation are starting to lose faith in the idea that we will ever become homeowners. Housing prices, rents, and the cost of living are rising so fast that I feel like I am chasing something unattainable. We are not out to get rich. We just want to be able to live with dignity after working hard. We want to build a future without constant financial stress. We are in a full-blown recession. The Liberals’ economic plan is not working. When are they going to give young people a little hope? When will they stop governing for the bankers and start governing for the people?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 78 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 32%Claims 53%The ask 15%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 35 wordsI have so much empathy for Canadians like Matis.These are the people for whom we stand up every day, the people for whom we fight, the people for whom we implement programs that work.PositioningClaims · 58 wordsI do not have their names, but my colleague’s riding has 13,500 families who receive $80 million thanks to the Canada child benefit.3My colleague voted against that.1Partly on pointWhat does he tell them?Off pointHis riding has 23,500 citizens who benefit from the Canada dental plan.4Partly on pointI do not know their names, Off pointbut he voted against those 23,500 constituents.2Partly on pointThe ask · 16 wordsMy colleague should change his mind and support measures that truly help his people, our people.Off point