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Wayne Long

95 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to John Brassard (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, next week, we will do the Prime Minister’s Office— We will do the whole PCO next week for them, Mr. Speaker, and you will get a kick out of that. Canada’s the only G20 country that is in a recession. While it may be a laughing matter to them, Canadians are missing mortgage payments, bankruptcies are up and nearly 60% have little or no money left over at the end of the month. The Liberal Prime Minister spent money in Rome: $4,213 on crème brûlée, $3,800 on chocolate and $593 on luxury Normandy buttercups, whatever that is. Canadians deserve an honest answer. Are we in a recession or a technical recession? Tell us the truth.”
Statement grade
C–
57 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 63%Positioning 29%Promise 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 32 wordsit is $8.8 million.1 The Leader of the Opposition has been in the House for 22 years.2 He has never had a job outside of the House, 3yet he spent $8.8 million.4Off point Positioning · 22 wordsOn this side of the House, we are serious about the economy. We are serious about building an economy for all Canadians.Positioning Claims · 28 wordsAbroad, we are signing trade deals. At home, we are cutting taxes. We are investing in infrastructure. We are investing in housing, in aerospace, in defence and more. Promise · 7 wordsWe are going to build Canada strong.Partly on pointVague promise Positioning · 6 wordsThey can continue with the rhetoric.PositioningOff point

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