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Jennifer McKelvie

93 words · 5 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Sandra Cobena (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada is the only G20 country to fall into a recession. Canadians are struggling with food affordability. One in four is now food insecure, yet the Prime Minister racks up $200,000 in airplane catering in three trips. He spent $17,000 on salmon alone, which is more than most families spend on food in an entire year. If the Prime Minister cannot control his own reckless spending, how can Canadians trust him to get us out of this recession, or is it technically not his problem?”
Statement grade
B–
72 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 80%Positioning 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 24 wordsat this moment, our government is making important investments in communities throughout Ontario, and these investments are going to create jobs for all Canadians. Positioning · 9 wordsWe know it is time to invest in Ontario.Positioning Claims · 50 wordsThis is why we are investing in the Black Creek sanitary trunk sewer, the Kitchener central transit hub, the downtown connection hub in the city of Barrie, the Scarborough subway, the Hamilton LRT and the Darlington nuclear power plant.1 All of these are in Ontario, Partly on pointwhere the member is from.Off point Positioning · 10 wordsWe care about Ontario, and it is time to invest.PositioningPartly on point

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