“Mr. Speaker, $94,000 was spent on a single flight. Only a member of the Liberal insider class cannot see a problem with that. It is more than five families spend in an entire year on groceries. Canada is the only G20 country in a recession, and Canadians are struggling. If one is in the Prime Minister’s entourage, well, one can expect $200,000 in catering. Federal executives get tens of millions of dollars in bonuses despite missing performance targets. If the Prime Minister thinks sacrifice is necessary, why are he and everyone in his inner circle exempt from it, especially in a recession?”
Statement grade
C
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 64 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 40%Claims 60%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 16 wordswe are focused on doing the hard work of building our country and building our economy.PositioningVague promiseClaims · 59 wordsTwo weeks ago, our government announced $350 million in housing and infrastructure investments in the Yukon to deliver stronger communities in the north.1Three weeks ago, we announced $61 million in funding for high-speed Internet projects in northern Manitoba.2Four weeks ago, we celebrated station construction being under way at all eight stations along the Surrey Langley SkyTrain extension.3Positioning · 24 wordsWe are doing the hard work from coast to coast to coast to build Canada.Partly on pointVague promiseAll they want to do is tear it down.PositioningOff point