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Steven MacKinnon

98 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Dominique Vien (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, under this Prime Minister, Canada is the only G20 country in a recession. This comes as no surprise. We have experienced three out of four quarters of negative growth. We are seeing a record decline in productivity. The public finance watchdog confirms that there is a 99% probability that the government will fall short of its fiscal anchor. Despite repeated warnings from the banks, this government continues to run up the debt. It will borrow $72 billion this year. Will the Prime Minister finally stop denying the obvious and admit to Canadians that our economy is indeed in a recession?”
Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
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Procedure 17%Claims 57%Positioning 26%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 17 wordsI will pick up where my colleague from Quebec City left off, because he was too modest.Procedure Claims · 56 wordsHe did not mention the Davie shipyard or its inclusion in the national shipbuilding strategy.1 He did not mention the Port of Québec as the first port of arrival. He did not mention developments such as the high-speed rail project in the national capital. Quebec and the City of Quebec are benefiting enormously from this growth. Positioning · 25 wordsThey are benefiting enormously from our strategy to build a very strong Canada, to create opportunities and to create jobs for the people of Quebec.PositioningVague promise

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