“Mr. Speaker, millions of Canadians live with vision and eye health problems. During the last Parliament, I was pleased that my private member’s bill, the National Strategy for Eye Care Act, passed both the House and the Senate unanimously. Thanks to this bill, we are putting a real focus on preventing and treating eye disease and ensuring better outcomes for all Canadians. Can the Minister of Health please tell the House how our government is leading a coordinated response to vision loss care?”
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 16 wordsI want to thank the member for Humber River—Black Creek for her leadership on this issue.ThanksClaims · 42 wordsThanks to her bill, we have tabled Canada’s first ever national eye care strategy.1We have brought together all levels of government, indigenous partners, health professionals and people with lived experience to create a strategy that reflects the needs of all Canadians.Thanks · 8 wordsThe member was critical to making this happen, ThanksPromise · 19 wordsand I hope this strategy helps improve access to eye care for the millions of Canadians who need it.
