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Jill McKnight

107 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Dan Albas (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada is the only G20 country that is in a recession. Shirley is a senior from my riding who lives alone in Summerland. She tells me that she does not drink, smoke or gamble. Her only luxury is a swim pass to the local public pool. Every time I speak to her, her tone is increasingly dire. Shirley and her friends do not see anything getting better, and they believe that the Liberals have forgotten seniors. Another recycled rebate is not going to fix it. Can the minister tell Shirley whether the reason she cannot pay her grocery bills is that we are in a recession, or is it just that it is a technical recession?”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 12%Procedure 5%Promise 8%Claims 75%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 13 wordsI thank my colleague for sharing the story of Shirley in his riding.Thanks Procedure · 5 wordsI have news for Shirley.Procedure Promise · 9 wordsThere are steps we are taking to support her.Vague promise Claims · 80 wordsShirley could be one of the individuals who might benefit from the middle-class tax cut, 1which is helping 22 million Canadians.2 She might also be somebody who is going to benefit from the expanded criteria for and accessibility to the disability tax credit.3 She might also be one of the individuals who is benefiting from the reduction of the fuel tax by 10¢ a litre.4 These are all things that can impact seniors but can also impact all British Columbians.Partly on point

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