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Peter Fragiskatos

133 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Anna Roberts (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, under the Liberal Prime Minister, Canada is the only G20 country to fall into a recession. I spoke with Rosa from Vaughan, a single senior who cannot afford a place of her own and rents a room in her 86-year-old cousin’s home due to the affordability crisis under the Liberal government. After a lifetime of hard work, Rosa is on the housing waiting list, but it will be a decade before a unit is available. Will the Liberals explain to Rosa the difference between a recession and a technical recession?”
Statement grade
C–
57 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 8%Claims 70%Reasoning 3%Positioning 14%Promise 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 10 wordsI will say what we will not do for seniors.Procedure Claims · 31 wordsWe will not propose, as our central seniors policy, cutting pensions, for which the Leader of the Opposition fought for 20‑plus years.1Off point Housing is a very legitimate issue to talk about. Reasoning · 4 wordsWe need more housing. Claims · 62 wordsThat is why the government is seized with exactly that objective, working with provincial and municipal governments toward that end.2Vague promise If we look at the headwinds facing the Canadian economy and the trade war that has been put upon us, we see that of course there are challenges. The hardships created will absolutely be there for Canadians day in and day out.Partly on point Positioning · 18 wordsConservatives can propose ideas that will not work and will not be serious. We are a serious government.Positioning Promise · 8 wordsWe are going to stand up for Canadians.Off pointVague promise

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