Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Ruby Sahota

127 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
C+
65 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 65%Claims 20%Reasoning 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 44 wordswith every speech I hear, I am starting to feel more and more worried that the Conservatives may vote against one of the most ambitious changes in criminal reform when it comes to protecting victims in this country. This bill would create incredible changes.Positioning Claims · 13 wordsIt would account for new technology. It would implement 12 mandatory minimum penalties.1 Positioning · 38 wordsThe Conservatives are fixated on making sure that it is all or nothing, so that victims do not get heard in court, so that perpetrators get away with their crime. We do not want them to get away.Positioning Claims · 13 wordsWhat we want is for them to have to serve mandatory minimum penalties. Reasoning · 19 wordsThis is why the lesson from the Senneville case is not that Parliament should abandon this but that Parliament—

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