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Adam van Koeverden

132 words · 5 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Roman Baber (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I am wondering, at a time when Canadians are experiencing record violence from criminal enterprises, whether it makes sense to narrow or water down mandatory minimum sentences by creating the safety valve. Does the member have any concern that we are going to have many more situations in which courts do not follow the mandatory minimum sentences?”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 4%Reasoning 56%Claims 40%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 5 wordsI understand the member’s concerns.Procedure Reasoning · 34 wordsI am a strong believer that our job in this House is not to play judge and jury; our job is to create the framework legal system to protect people and to protect victims. Claims · 24 wordsThat is what the bill seeks to do: protect victims, expedite the justice system, and ensure that justice is served and victims are protected. Reasoning · 40 wordsI also strongly believe that we need to invest more in upstream solutions, because simply suggesting that everything is in place for a safe society and we could not do anything to prevent crime is also not a responsible approach. Claims · 29 wordsWe are taking a balanced approach, investing in upstream solutions while also ensuring that the legal system has everything it needs in order to ensure that justice is served.Partly on pointVague promise

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