Replying to Martin Champoux (Bloc Québécois). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, there are many positive aspects to Bill C‑16, as was mentioned earlier. There are, however, certain shortcomings and some issues that deserved to be explored in greater depth. For example, a number of amendments were proposed. Earlier, we heard the Conservatives place great emphasis on an issue close to their hearts: mandatory minimum sentences. The Bloc Québécois also had proposals to make. I am a bit concerned about the government’s approach these days. They are rushing things and cutting debates short. They are requesting time allocation, which are closure motions, strictly speaking. I wonder if the secretary of state could share his thoughts on this. Are there not important issues—such as this bill, which is extremely important to society as a whole—that warrant taking the time to show a little respect for the views of the opposition parties?”
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Thanks 15%Claims 57%Reasoning 14%The ask 14%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 15 wordsI want to thank the members of the committee for their work on Bill C‑16.1ThanksClaims · 57 wordsIt is extraordinarily important and serious.We urgently need to find solutions to improve Canada’s justice system.Vague promiseWe could debate this all summer and into the fall.However, people are urgently awaiting for the legislation to be passed.This is a long-standing issue in the court systems, and as provincial governments are seeking to expedite their processes, Reasoning · 14 wordsand invest in courts and courtrooms, we have an obligation to act as well.The ask · 14 wordsThat expeditious approach, acting urgently, is one that I encourage all members to undertake.