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Cathay Wagantall

1418 words · 68 sentences · 84 clauses

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Procedure 8%Claims 57%Thanks 3%Anecdote 1%Positioning 18%Reasoning 6%The ask 6%Promise 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 39 wordsBill C‑16, an act to amend certain acts in relation to criminal and correctional matters, is what I am going to be discussing tonight, including child protection, gender-based violence, delays and other measures that are part of the bill.Procedure Claims · 27 wordsIt is a broad justice omnibus bill that combines victim protection and criminal law modernization measures, but it also has a fundamental restructuring of mandatory minimum sentences. Procedure · 8 wordsAlso, there are some good parts to this.Procedure Claims · 19 wordsBanning deepfakes of intimate partners will keep Canadians, especially women, safe from having non-consensual intimate images created and shared. Thanks · 27 wordsI am thankful the government has adopted the proposal from the member of Parliament for Calgary Nose Hill in her bill, Bill C‑216, to do exactly that.1Thanks Claims · 11 wordsThe bill also criminalizes coercive or controlling conduct within intimate relationships.2 Anecdote · 10 wordsThis is something that I have been very concerned about.Anecdote Claims · 88 wordsI believe the behaviours that are the precursors to serious injury and death of women in those relationships often happen when women are most vulnerable. The government has basically failed to mention that when women are especially vulnerable is when they are pregnant and expecting a child. Provisions from the same bill to bring in mandatory reporting for child sexual abuse materials have also been taken up, helping our kids feel safe from the most despicable crimes, 3and I hope it will keep them safer from those crimes. Thanks · 22 wordsI applaud the member for Kamloops—Thompson—Nicola, whose calls have been heard to make the murder of an intimate partner automatically first-degree murder.4Thanks Claims · 37 wordsSadly, the Liberals opposed the member of Parliament for Edmonton Gateway’s bill to introduce a three-year mandatory minimum sentence for all forms of extortion.5 However, at the very least, Bill C‑16 introduces an aggravating factor for sextortion.6 Positioning · 15 wordsIt is a step in the right direction, but it is not anywhere near enough.Positioning Procedure · 11 wordsThere are some good things in Bill C‑16, but of course, ProcedurePositioning · 25 wordsas we are hearing today, there are some very serious concerns with it specifically. Despite the positive additions, it continues with the Liberals’ soft-on-crime agenda.Positioning Claims · 120 wordsIt would empower judges to ignore literally every mandatory prison sentence in the Criminal Code other than for murder and treason. The Liberals want to empower judges to ignore mandatory sentences for such things as aggravated sexual assault with a gun, human trafficking, multiple violent firearm offences, extortion with a firearm, weapons trafficking and drive-by shootings with a restricted or prohibited firearm. These are some of the things that the government is prepared to declare are not violent crimes worthy of further mandatory sentences. By creating a general safety valve, Bill C‑16 introduces a sweeping sentencing change, allowing courts to impose sentences below mandatory minimum capabilities when applying the minimum would amount to cruel and unusual punishment for the offender.7 Procedure · 6 wordsI have nowhere to put this.Procedure Reasoning · 23 wordsIf mandatory is not mandatory, then we have an issue with our judicial system’s being given the opportunity to play around with this. Claims · 205 wordsThis provision would apply to nearly all mandatory minimum sentences in the Criminal Code and other federal statutes, effectively converting mandatory minimums from binding sentence floors into discretionary benchmarks. While custodial sentences would still be required, Parliament’s ability to set firm baseline consequences for serious violent crimes would be significantly weakened, encouraging lighter sentences for violent and repeat offenders, as well as the long-term erosion of mandatory minimum sentencing as a policy tool. This would result in more, not less, violent criminal activity on our streets. Victims, advocacy groups and the federal ombudsperson for victims of crime are in disbelief. In 2021, instead of fulfilling the responsibility to review the Victims Bill of Rights, 8as was outlined, the Liberals began a study through the House of Commons Standing Committee on Justice and Human Rights.9 According to the ombud for victims of crime, the committee eventually produced a December 2022 report titled, “Improving Support for Victims of Crime”. Critics, including the ombud, argued that the review was not as comprehensive as the legislation warranted.10 Although 13 recommendations were made, many of the most significant remain outstanding to this day. The federal ombud continues to argue that victims rights remain largely symbolic rights that are not enforced. Procedure · 35 wordsLet us comment on the fact that this is what is happening to the victims, but look at what is happening with respect to the sentencing of those who perform violent crimes against those victims.Procedure Claims · 78 wordsIn 2024, it was stated that many of the recommendations could significantly improve victims’ experiences if they were implemented.11Hidden agency Many of the more significant recommendations remain outstanding, such as the automated notification of rights. One of the biggest complaints is that victims are still generally required to seek out information themselves. Victims are still not automatically informed of their rights and services, 12or of offender status, parole processes and restitution options, yet the accused are informed of theirs.13 Positioning · 6 wordsWhat is wrong with this scenario?Positioning Claims · 84 wordsAlso outstanding is stronger enforcement of victims’ rights. The Canadian Victims Bill of Rights gives victims the right to information and whatnot. However, there is still no broad mechanism allowing them to go to court and obtain a remedy when those rights are violated. National minimal service standards are also outstanding. The committee and ombudsperson called for more consistent national standards, 14but the government has not provided those national standards, leaving victims to try to navigate services that vary significantly between provinces and territories.15 Positioning · 62 wordsWhy has the Liberal government treated the Victims Bill of Rights as largely symbolic and failed to strengthen victims’ rights in a meaningful way? Why instead are victims seeing the insertion of this poison pill in the form of a safety valve in Bill C‑16, which is dangerously weakening Liberal criminal justice policies and giving more leniency to criminals, in sentencing reforms?Positioning Procedure · 6 wordsThat is what is happening here.Procedure Positioning · 9 wordsThis poison pill is antithetical to preventing violent crimes.Positioning Claims · 6 wordsIt would be giving more leniency. The ask · 19 wordsThere should be one track in Bill C‑16 for victim protection, coercive control, deepfake offences and trial efficiency measures. Positioning · 62 wordsIt is typical of the federal government members to bring forward such a bill. Quite honestly, they know that much of it was put forward by our members, yet they put something in there that is antithetical to the goodness that could be done on behalf of victims while lessening the amount of violent crime that continues to grow in this country.Positioning Claims · 27 wordsThat is because of the laws it has allowed, such as bail and not jail and lowering the sentencing requirements for those committing very serious violent crimes. Reasoning · 8 wordsEach component should be studied on its merits. The ask · 22 wordsLet us study the bill separately from the desire that the Liberals have to basically remove mandatory minimums from our judicial system. Promise · 15 wordsWe would be able to support the victim protection and procedural component of Bill C‑16, The ask · 18 wordsbut the mandatory minimum sentencing safety valve is definitely something that should not be part of the bill. Positioning · 5 wordsWhy does it even matter?Positioning Reasoning · 27 wordsParliament sets mandatory minimum sentences for these heinous crimes for a reason. If the Liberals allow judges to ignore them, there would be nothing mandatory about it. Claims · 31 wordsThe vast number of mandatory minimum sentences have already been deemed constitutional, 16and now the Liberals would be putting them in jeopardy when they have already passed that test of constitutionality. Positioning · 18 wordsThey would be allowing judicial activism. As a matter of fact, they are encouraging it toward lesser sentencing.Positioning Claims · 36 wordsOn top of that, they are using hypotheticals rather than the real situation in front of them to make decisions that are actually causing more harm to victims and creating more violent crime in our country. Reasoning · 29 wordsThe court’s responsibility is to interpret and use the laws created by parliamentarians that are in the best interests of those who face the terrible conditions of violent crime. Procedure · 8 wordsWe have heard about many of those today.Procedure Positioning · 30 wordsWe continue to see the erosion of Canadians’ safety when criminals’ rights are put ahead of victims’ rights. This is part of the problem with this approach to the charter.Positioning Claims · 40 wordsWe have already indicated that a vast number of mandatory minimum sentences have been deemed constitutional, yet the government would be giving the judicial system, an activist judicial system, a window to go out and make huge changes to that. Positioning · 23 wordsThe passage of this provision would be a total abolition of our duty as elected representatives to keep Canadians and their communities safe.Positioning The ask · 21 wordsThe Liberals should split this poison pill out of the bill so that parliamentarians can work together to pass Bill C‑16.

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