“Mr. Speaker, I know that the member cares deeply about this issue, especially when it comes to protecting children from predators. The member is right that we should not have to talk about child sextortion, but many children in this country have committed suicide because they were victims of sextortion. The bill would broaden the number of offences under this type of crime. I think this is a really important step to take, because this is where the ball is going, unfortunately. These are the types of crimes that are being reported. It saddens me to hear that the Conservatives would not support protecting children the way that this is being proposed in the bill.”
Statement grade
A
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Average 93 / 100
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Positioning 25%Claims 30%The ask 33%Reasoning 11%
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 20 wordsI would absolutely share the position of the Secretary of State for Combatting Crime that this is urgently needed legislation.1PositioningClaims · 24 wordsIt would immediately restore 12 mandatory minimum penalties in a way that is constitutional.2It would protect children.It would protect victims of crime.The ask · 26 wordsI hope that all members will support the legislation, just as members on this side of the House have supported a number of private member’s bills, 3Reasoning · 9 wordsbecause we can all care about intimate partner violence.