“Mr. Speaker, the member’s speech was passionate, and I agree. Coming from where I do, the north coast of British Columbia, I have experienced that most of my life. The government wants to portray this side of the House as not being supportive of this type of bill or protecting vulnerable people. The Conservative member for York Centre moved an amendment, CPC-13, that was defeated by the Liberal government. It would have protected child pornography possession and access offences from charter challenges under section 7 and section 12 by enacting the notwithstanding clause, while also preventing these offences from benefiting from the bill’s mandatory minimum safety valve. Why did the government not protect victims in this equation?”
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Average 84 / 100
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The ask 34%Positioning 19%Claims 31%Reasoning 16%
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Mr. Speaker, The ask · 40 wordsI am in no way assuming that the members opposite will not support this bill.I am inviting them to support this bill, just as we have supported a number of private members’ bills that also address intimate partner violence.Positioning · 23 wordsWhen it comes to this type of scourge, an epidemic, we need to put down the partisanship and move forward with the progress.PositioningClaims · 32 wordsThe justice committee has met nine times, heard from 54 witnesses and received 60 written briefs on this study alone.2It considered over 100 amendments, 3which have added to strengthening the bill.Partly on pointReasoning · 19 wordsWhat is is important is that any legislation passed in the House be constitutional.Who gets to decide that?Claims · 4 wordsIt is the courts.1