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Tamara Kronis

162 words · 10 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 97 / 100
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Claims 73%Positioning 7%The ask 18%Reasoning 2%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 59 wordsin Nanaimo—Ladysmith, the addictions crisis is not an abstract policy debate. It is on our streets, in our parks, in our shelters and in the lives of families who are praying their loved one gets one more chance. Too many people are trying to get clean while living next door to the very thing they are fighting to escape. Positioning · 11 wordsThat is not compassion. That is setting people up to fail.Positioning Claims · 59 wordsNanaimo needs every kind of housing, including sober housing. We need safe, stable places for people who have chosen recovery, people who want to rebuild their lives without being surrounded by drugs. This Monday, June 8, Nanaimo city council is convening a special governance and priorities committee meeting to discuss the urgent need for sober housing in our community.1 The ask · 29 wordsI am pleading with the government to pay attention and to allocate a share of federal housing funds for sober housing in Nanaimo because recovery needs more than hope. Reasoning · 4 wordsIt needs a home.

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