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Yasir Naqvi

140 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

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Greeting 13%Claims 59%Thanks 29%

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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 18 wordsit is a great joy to celebrate the Great Glebe Garage Sale in my community of Ottawa Centre.Greeting Claims · 82 wordsIf anyone happens to be in Ottawa, in my community, on the third Saturday of every May, the Great Glebe Garage Sale is the place to go.1 For 40 years, neighbours have participated in this sale.2 People can get such incredible, great deals on hidden treasures that people have stored in their basements. It also acts as a fundraiser for the Ottawa Food Bank.3 There were 25,000 people who came out this year.4 It was incredible. My team was there as well. Thanks · 40 wordsI want to thank the Glebe Community Association for organizing this incredible event every year.5 I congratulate all the volunteers; John Crump, president; 6June Creelman, vice-president; 7and Sam Woods, who coordinated the 40th version of the Great Glebe Garage Sale.8Thanks

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