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Patty Hajdu

108 words · 6 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Garnett Genuis (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I want to be clear that it is good news that more Canadians are working this month than last month, but we have to be honest about these numbers, because the government House leader is eager to cherry-pick. We have 24,500 fewer Canadians working today than were at the beginning of the year. Compared to pre-pandemic averages, unemployment is up by 0.6% overall and over 2.5 points for youth. Under this Liberal Prime Minister, we have the second-highest unemployment in the G7. Having the best job numbers in Canada should not be like having the best bobsledding team in Jamaica. Canada is the only G20 economy in a recession.”
Statement grade
C+
Average 66 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 21%Claims 56%Positioning 23%

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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 23 wordsI will pass by the obvious material in that question to focus on what is important, which is jobs, and jobs for youth.Procedure Claims · 60 wordsThat member has spoken many times about the importance of creating good jobs for youth, and in fact 99,000 new jobs for youth is something to celebrate.1 In fact, Benjamin Reitzes from the BMO said that the solid May jobs report should silence the people who are talking down the Canadian economy.2 He said this “should silence the recession crowd.”3Partly on point Positioning · 25 wordsI guess he is speaking about the member opposite.Off point While those guys are running down Canadian opportunities, we are focused on creating jobs for everyone.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise

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