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Mélanie Joly

109 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Gérard Deltell (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, of course, on this side of the House, we are always pleased when Canadians find jobs. However, as of right now, there has been a net loss of 24,500 jobs since the beginning of the year. I also want to talk about young people. The reality is that youth unemployment has gone up. The Parliamentary Budget Officer was scathing yesterday when he said that the odds of this government hitting its fiscal anchor of reducing the deficit is less than 1%. That is the reality we get with this government. Is the government capable of admitting that, yes, Canada is the only G7 country that is in a recession?”
Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 22%Claims 62%Procedure 9%Aside 6%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 10 wordsI know that my colleague is passionate about the economy.Positioning Claims · 7 wordsWe have had several conversations about it. Positioning · 14 wordsI also know that he is a numbers guy and that he respects facts.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 10 wordsThe truth is that the figures are clear this morning.ProcedureUnearned certainty Claims · 42 wordsWe helped create 88,000 new jobs.1 My colleague said that youth unemployment is up, 3but it is actually down. It dropped by nearly 1% in the past month.2 I can, of course, provide him with the most recent figures from Statistics Canada. Aside · 7 wordsI am sure he will read them.Aside Claims · 19 wordsThere is also good news when it comes to affordability. This morning, the Prime Minister made an important announcement—Partly on point

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