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Steven MacKinnon

101 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Yves Perron (Bloc Québécois)
“Madam Speaker, Ottawa is once again bowing to pressure from Washington. The government wants to cancel a levy increase and allow Netflix, Amazon and other streaming platforms to get out of paying their fair share towards funding culture. The Coalition for the Diversity of Cultural Expressions is concerned about this situation. It stated: “Ottawa’s decision...represents a major and deeply troubling setback in the face of U.S. pressure on Canada’s cultural sovereignty.” Who is in charge of cultural policy in this country: the Prime Minister or Donald Trump?”
Statement grade
D
46 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 67%Claims 29%Thanks 4%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 64 wordsI understand why the Bloc is trying to redeem itself, given that it did not even mention culture in its election platform or budget requests.1 I also understand why it wants to ignore today’s good news about employment and the job market in Quebec. For our part, we are focusing on the economy, on creating opportunities for young people and on delivering major projects.PositioningOff pointVague promise Claims · 29 wordsThe economy has created some 88,000 jobs.2 Quebec stands out as having the second-lowest unemployment rate among all the provinces, thanks in particular to the manufacturing and construction sectors.3Partly on point Thanks · 4 wordsWell done, young Quebeckers.Thanks Positioning · 4 wordsThat is good news.PositioningPartly on point

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