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Adam van Koeverden

137 words · 13 sentences · 16 clauses

Replying to Jasraj Hallan (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, his answer on plunging the economy into a recession is to give Canadians $18 a week. The PBO also exposed the government for having a less than 1% chance of meeting its own deficit-to-GDP ratio fiscal target. That is a better chance than a Liberal actually answering a question in this place. Will the Prime Minister stop stuffing his face with taxpayer-funded crème brûlée and tell us if we are in a technical recession or a full-blown Liberal one?”
Statement grade
D
47 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 32%Claims 36%Promise 23%Procedure 3%Reasoning 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 44 wordsI have known the member for a number of years and, in fact, I have a great deal of respect for him. He overcame enormous personal challenges to be in the House, which he has been open about. That is why I respect him, ThanksClaims · 28 wordsbut he conducts himself in this way. The opposition leader’s office, I guess, has given orders for him to throw insults like this, and the rest of it. Promise · 19 wordsWe are not going to focus on that. We are going to engage in a positive approach to politics.Off pointVague promise Procedure · 4 wordsWhat do we find?Procedure Claims · 22 wordsAlmost 90,000 jobs were created, many of which are in the construction sector.1Partly on point He is from Alberta. He talks about the trades.Off point Reasoning · 7 wordsWe need to build the country up. Promise · 13 wordsThat is exactly what we are going to do.Vague promise We have a plan—Partly on point

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