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Yasir Naqvi

115 words · 8 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Pat Kelly (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, of course we believe in Canada. We believe in Canadians. We do not believe in the Liberal government, because it is the only government in the G20 to lead its economy into a recession. This week, we also learned that the government is borrowing $72 billion this year, not $65 billion as stated in the budget. The Montreal Economic Institute said that the deficit is on track to exceed $117 billion by 2035, and that is even without new spending. Will the finance minister admit that this week’s reports have destroyed whatever fiscal credibility he thinks that he might still have?”
Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 36%Claims 60%Procedure 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 27 wordsI appreciate that the opposition has a job to do, which is to critique the government, but, as a government, our focus is to build our economy.Positioning Claims · 26 wordsThat is why we have been working very hard to make sure that we diversify our trade and that we open more markets for Canadian businesses.Partly on pointVague promise Procedure · 5 wordsThe results are coming in.Procedure Claims · 11 wordsIt has been reported that 88,000 new jobs have been created.1Partly on point Positioning · 7 wordsWe are also not leaving people behind.Positioning Claims · 32 wordsThat is why, as of today, the groceries and essentials benefit is going to be coming to people.2 They will be getting, additionally, up to $533 for a family with two kids.3 Positioning · 7 wordsThis is how we are helping Canadians.PositioningOff point

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