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Vince Gasparro

67 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Rachael Thomas (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, what the member just said is that those children in my riding who are suffering from poverty and food insecurity should be thankful for the government because they have never had it so good. Shame on that member for claiming that. These are individuals who are finding it very difficult to make ends meet. Food insecurity is rising and Canadians are struggling. Meanwhile, the Prime Minister splurges on fine wines, braised beef, Normandy butter cups and all sorts of things, while jetting around the world. Is he enjoying his luxurious lifestyle at the expense of taxpayers during a true recession or is it just a technical recession?”
Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 60%Claims 40%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 27 wordsI find it really amazing that the member gets up and is more concerned about debating the price of paper clips than actually trying to help Canadians.PositioningOff point Claims · 27 wordsShe has voted against every affordability measure that has been brought forward.1 In my riding of Eglinton—Lawrence, 37,000 people are going to benefit from this groceries benefit, 2Positioning · 13 wordsso are you telling them they do not deserve it?Partly on point Shame on you.PositioningOff point

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