“Madam Speaker, under the Liberal Prime Minister, Canada is the only G20 country to fall into a recession, with an economic decline in three of the last four quarters. The Parliamentary Budget Officer is saying that the chance the Liberal government will achieve its fiscal anchor is at less than 1%. We are on the brink of a major energy crisis, with rising inflation from higher energy and higher food prices that are guaranteed. Canada is in a recession today, and it is not looking good for the rest of the year. When will the Liberal government reverse course and stop this economic slide?”
Statement grade
B–
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Average 73 / 100
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Positioning 37%Claims 53%Promise 10%
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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 20 wordsthis is a government that is hard at work for all Canadians.Partly on pointVague promiseWe have a plan to build Canada strong, PositioningVague promiseClaims · 42 wordsand on days like today we are seeing real progress with 88,000 net new jobs.1The largest increase in those jobs is in construction.2Youth unemployment fell by nearly a point.3In the member’s home province alone there are 14,000 new jobs.4Positioning · 9 wordsOur plan is working.We are hard at work.PositioningVague promisePromise · 8 wordsWe are going to keep working for Canadians.Partly on pointVague promise