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Steven MacKinnon

95 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Dave Epp (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, Canada is the only G20 country in a recession, under the Liberal Prime Minister. Farmers warn that food security begins with protecting valuable farmland, yet the Liberals continue to advance the $90-billion Alto rail project, despite concerns about its impact on more than 5,500 farms. While $2.5 million in bonuses has already been paid before a single inch of track has been laid, Canadians across the country pay and local communities suffer. Is the Liberals’ plan for food security to slice up farmland? Is this what they call governing in a technical recession, or is it really just a technical war on agriculture?”
Statement grade
D–
42 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 24%Aside 26%Promise 32%Positioning 18%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Claims · 14 wordswe are so proud to be pursuing the development of high-speed rail throughout Canada.1Partly on pointVague promise Aside · 25 wordsIn fact, we look forward to the day when that member can hail a high-speed train in his sector of the woods in southwestern Ontario.Off pointMockery Promise · 30 wordsWe will, of course, achieve that by working with farmers and their representatives.Vague promise We will, of course, do that by upholding principles whereby agriculture continues to flourish in our country.Vague promise Claims · 9 wordsWe do note the Conservatives’ opposition to this project. Positioning · 17 wordsI can tell that member that most Canadians have noted their opposition to that project as well.PositioningOff pointUnearned certainty

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