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Jenny Kwan

126 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Elizabeth May (Green)
“Madam Speaker, the hon. member for Vancouver East anticipated my question, because I was just asking where the accountability measures are in the bill. I wonder if she has noticed, as I have, that the responsible minister is not actually listed. The bill just says they may be “designated by the Governor in Council”. Where is the accountability?”
Statement grade
A–
87 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 31%Claims 60%Aside 6%Reasoning 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 5 wordsthat is exactly the point.Positioning Claims · 31 wordsThere is no accountability in the bill. It does not even name the minister responsible for ensuring the deliverability.1 It does not actually say what the government is trying to do. Positioning · 18 wordsHow many units will it build and in which provinces? What are the targets the government will set?Positioning Claims · 24 wordsThe bill does not even ensure that the government delivers on letting Canadians know what the outcomes are, and there is no affordability measure. Aside · 7 wordsIt is just like, “oh well, whatever”.Aside Positioning · 16 wordsIf we have a plan like that, how is the housing crisis going to be solved?Positioning Claims · 21 wordsHistory has shown that what the government has done over the last 30 years is rely on just the private sector, Reasoning · 4 wordsand that has failed.

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