“Madam Speaker, there are a few disturbing comments on the record already, unfortunately, early this Monday, from the government whip and the parliamentary secretary to the government House leader. I find it very unfortunate that they continue to accuse Conservatives of hating Canada. I love this country, and the member for Winnipeg North knows that. I find it very disturbing that he continues to accuse us of rightfully calling out the government where it has failed over the last 11 years. There are more Canadians at food banks than ever before, including educated Canadians with post-secondary degrees, more than ever, lining up at food banks because their jobs do not pay them enough to pay for the increase in food prices under the Liberals. There are more Canadians under 35 out of the housing market than ever before. What exactly is it that the Liberals think they have to be so proud of?”
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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 20 wordsI am not sure that question was actually directed at me, but I will take the time to answer it.ProcedureAnecdote · 23 wordsDuring my speech, I recounted a story my father used to tell me when I was young, a story about optimists and pessimists.1AnecdoteReasoning · 47 wordsThe whole idea is that if we want to build a strong Canada, if we want to look to the future, we have to be part of the optimists’ club.If we are pessimists, we will get nowhere together, and the word “together” will cease to exist.Positioning · 27 wordsThat is what we are building, Vague promiseand it saddens me to see members of the opposition parties saying one thing in the House and then doing another.PositioningClaims · 23 wordsI am talking about voting against measures that help, such as the Canadian dental care plan and the Canada groceries and essentials benefit.2The ask · 12 wordsI would like to see them join us on the optimistic side.Off point