Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 70%Procedure 11%Thanks 19%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 26 wordsCanada is a space-faring nation.We have contributed valuable technologies, research, scientists and engineers, and we are a global leader in the field of space exploration.Procedure · 11 wordsWe can now add another achievement to our list of accomplishments.ProcedureClaims · 43 wordsThe first Canadian to orbit the moon, Canadian astronaut Jeremy Hansen, is in Ottawa today following the success of the Artemis II mission.12This mission has inspired Canadians and stands as a symbol of hope for our continued exploration of the final frontier.Thanks · 19 wordsWe commend Mr. Hansen’s contribution and, on behalf of all Canadians across the country, thank him for his service.Thanks