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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 52 wordsSaturday marked 20 years since the death of OPP sergeant Greg Stobbart, a beloved Burlington resident who was killed by a careless motorist while on a training ride on his bike.2He was a dedicated officer with 25 years of experience, a committed athlete and a deeply loved family man and friend.1Thanks · 12 wordsIn the face of unimaginable loss, Greg’s wife, Eleanor McMahon, chose courage.ThanksClaims · 57 wordsShe founded the Share the Road Cycling Coalition, 3which has since become one of the most influential road safety organizations in Canada.Eleanor’s advocacy resulted in “Greg’s law”, Ontario’s one-metre safe passage law, strengthening penalties for drivers who injure or kill vulnerable road users.5From grief to purpose, she transformed road safety in Ontario and saved lives.Thanks · 28 wordsWith the 20th-anniversary Share the Road Gran Fondo in Milton and the annual Ontario Bike Summit, we remember Sergeant Stobbart, honour his legacy and together continue the work.4ThanksVague promise