Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Greeting 16%Claims 56%Thanks 28%
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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 29 wordsI rise today with profound sadness to pay tribute to a dear friend, a dedicated public servant and a remarkable leader, Murray Fearrey, who passed away on May 28.1GreetingClaims · 102 wordsMurray spent his entire life in Haliburton, 2where he was born and raised and devoted time to his entire community, which he loved.His commitment to public service spanned nearly six decades, beginning in 1971.3As reeve and mayor of Dysart, plus 12 years as county warden, he served with unwavering dedication, integrity and compassion, always putting the needs of residents first.4Murray’s impact can be found from Head Lake Park to the arena, the curling club, the library, the hospital, the long-term care centre and many more.He helped shape the institutions for generations that will benefit because of his work.Thanks · 51 wordsBeyond his many accomplishments, of course, Murray was a trusted friend, a source of wise counsel and a true gentleman whose steady leadership earned the respect of all who knew him.I extend my deepest condolences to his partner Donna, his children, his friends and colleagues.May he rest in peace.Thanks