Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Reasoning 28%Claims 48%Thanks 11%The ask 13%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 24 wordsas we celebrate Pride season across Canada, we are reminded that the rights and freedoms many enjoy today should never be taken for granted.Claims · 27 wordsAround the world, identifying as 2SLGBTQIA+ remains illegal in 65 countries, 1and in 12 jurisdictions, individuals still face the death penalty simply for being who they are.2Thanks · 12 wordsI would like to recognize the work of the Canadian Pride Caucus, ThanksClaims · 52 wordswhich is well known for its work here at home, but it is also playing an increasingly important international role.Through engagement with foreign parliamentarians, human rights defenders, diplomatic missions and civil society organizations, the caucus helps advance Canada’s commitment to dignity, inclusion and protection of human rights on the global scale.The ask · 21 wordsI invite all colleagues from all parties to join us tomorrow at noon on Parliament Hill for the Pride flag raising.3Reasoning · 21 wordsLet us come together to celebrate Pride season and reaffirm Canada’s commitment to equality, inclusion and protecting human rights for all.Thanks · 6 wordsI wish everyone a happy Pride.Thanks