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Steven MacKinnon

72 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Gabriel Hardy (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, while 2.2 million Canadians line up at food banks, the Liberals are still refusing to let Canadians know that we are the only G20 nation in a recession. The apparent reason has something to do with decisions made over the past 11 years and the Liberals’ lack of vision. Let us look at the facts: Economic growth is sluggish, productivity is weak and deficits already exceed what was forecast in the budget. After a week of dodging the question, can the Prime Minister tell us, yes or no, if we are in a recession? The first step toward solving a problem is to acknowledge it.”
Statement grade
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Average 87 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 67%Procedure 8%Positioning 12%Promise 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 29 wordsobviously, the member opposite missed the stellar jobs report that came out last Friday. Had he read it, he would have seen that Canada has created some 88,000 jobs.1 Procedure · 6 wordsHowever, there is more good news.Procedure Claims · 19 wordsIn our province, Quebec, the province with the second-lowest unemployment rate, unemployment rates fell for women, youth and men.23 Positioning · 9 wordsAcross the country, this is good news for Canada.Positioning Promise · 9 wordsWe are going to keep building Canada very strong.Partly on pointVague promise

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