“Mr. Speaker, under this Liberal Prime Minister, Canada is the only G20 country in a recession, and in the last few days, we have learned more about how bad the numbers actually are. Stats Canada reports that business investment has now fallen for five straight quarters. Labour productivity has declined in three of the last four quarters. If the Prime Minister’s plan is working, why are Canadian businesses seeing a continuous decline in investment and productivity? Will the Liberals admit that we are in a recession and that their plan is not working at all?”
Statement grade
C+
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Average 69 / 100
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Claims 35%Positioning 34%Promise 20%The ask 11%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 20 wordswhat a great day it is to be Canadian when we have Canadian astronaut Jeremy Hansen on the Hill today.Positioning · 22 wordsHe brought this country together.Off pointThe Conservatives love numbers.I know they love numbers, so here is a number for them: Partly on point88,000.PositioningClaims · 8 wordsThe Canadian economy created 88,000 jobs in May.1Positioning · 5 wordsThat is an amazing accomplishment.PositioningPromise · 16 wordsOn this side of the House, we are going to focus on building a Canada strong.Vague promiseThe ask · 9 wordsIt is time for them to get on board.Partly on point