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Tim Hodgson

69 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Andrew Lawton (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I wish the minister were as interested in the jobs of Canadians as he is in his own. The Parliamentary Budget Officer said the Liberal government has a 1% chance of meeting its fiscal anchor, which is still better odds than getting a straight answer from the government in question period. Behind these numbers are people: people in food bank lines, people going on unemployment, young people who cannot get that critical first job. The London region, which includes St. Thomas and Elgin, has lost another 600 jobs in the last month, bringing it up to over 21,000 in the last two and a half years. Maybe the minister will not tell me there is a recession, but will he tell these Canadians there is?”
Statement grade
C+
65 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 23%Claims 71%Procedure 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordswhat I am not interested in is his job.PositioningOff point Claims · 49 wordsI am interested in the 18,000 jobs we have created at Darlington.1 I am interested in the 2,000 jobs we have created at Contrecœur.2 I am interested in the 8,000 jobs at LNG Canada.3 I am interested in the 5,000 jobs we are going to create at Ksi Lisims.4Partly on point Procedure · 4 wordsI could keep going.Procedure Positioning · 7 wordsHe should start worrying about his job.PositioningOff point

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