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Stephanie McLean

84 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Jeff Kibble (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, under the Liberal Prime Minister, Canada is the only G20 country in a recession, and in the past few days, we have learned much more about how dire the state of our economy is under his watch. On Saturday night, in a Lake Cowichan pub, workers told me their biggest worry was affording groceries, but the Liberals’ recycled grocery stunt cuts off at only $59,000 for a couple, meaning that full-time workers are shut out. The Prime Minister laughed at suffering Canadians in this House last week. Will he stop laughing and start caring so that Canadians can afford to eat?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 15%Reasoning 26%Claims 45%Promise 13%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordsCanadians deserve facts, not Conservative fear.Positioning Reasoning · 22 wordsLabelling the economy without context does not help workers or businesses. The Bank of Canada has, in fact, cautioned against doing that.1 Claims · 38 wordsEconomies around the world are facing global uncertainty, but Canada is weathering these global headwinds better than many of our peers. Our economy is stable, jobs are being created and we continue to support Canadians through these headwinds.Vague promise Promise · 11 wordsWe will remain focused on affordability, economic growth and supporting jobs, Partly on pointVague promisePositioning · 7 wordswhile the Conservatives remain focused on fearmongering.PositioningOff point

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