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Wayne Long

92 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Kristina Tesser Derksen (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, last Friday, families in my riding of Milton East—Halton Hills South woke up to good news. May’s labour force survey showed robust job gains, which is a promising sign that our economic plan is bearing fruit. Also, the CRA began issuing payments under our government’s enhanced Canada groceries and essentials benefit, which is equal to a 50% increase over the previous GST credit. Can the Secretary of State for the CRA and Financial Institutions update this House on how our economic plan is setting a long-term trajectory for growth and resilience, while also making life more affordable for Canadians here and now?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 14%Claims 35%Promise 36%Positioning 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 13 wordsthe member for Milton East—Halton Hills South’s question is another great one today.Thanks Claims · 20 wordsLast week in Halifax, I was proud to announce that the CRA began issuing the top-up groceries and essentials benefit.1 Promise · 26 wordsBy introducing that benefit, we are going to build a strong Canada.Vague promise We are going to support families.Vague promise We are going to build a strong economy.Vague promise Claims · 12 wordsWe see evidence of that with 88,000 jobs created just last month.2 Positioning · 14 wordsThe glass is half empty; the Conservatives are going to talk down our economy.Positioning Promise · 7 wordsWe are going to build Canada strong.Off pointVague promise

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