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Shannon Miedema

107 words · 4 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Sébastien Lemire (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, when it comes to supply and appropriations, a major issue for me in the past year has been the announcement about budget cuts to science and research. This will save the government approximately $27 million to $35 million over five years. Will saving this amount over five years really make a difference when we know that the deficit is over $70 billion? The government will save a mere $27 million to $35 million by making cuts to science and research. What we are also seeing today in Bill C-30 is that the government is going to permit the use of more pesticides without knowing what kind of cocktail this will create and without knowing what impact it will have on human health, because the government is also making cuts to the science and research that would help find alternatives. Is my colleague concerned about that?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
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Positioning 17%Claims 76%Reasoning 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 18 wordsI am really excited about the dual spending that is happening as we put our strategy into action.PositioningVague promise Claims · 23 wordsDalhousie University has a wonderful ocean science and research program, and it is capitalizing on defence spending to further ocean science and research.1 Reasoning · 8 wordsThat is a really important piece of it, Claims · 58 wordswhere we are going to increase our innovation and research.Vague promise Excitedly, today, we just announced that the Our Ocean Conference is going to be hosted for the first time in Canada in 14 years in Halifax in 2027, 2where we will bring all the great minds from science and research together to continue to advance our shared priorities.Partly on pointVague promise

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