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Dan Albas

163 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Alexis Deschênes (Bloc Québécois). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Mr. Speaker, I want to ask my colleague a question to determine his party’s position on a request that is very important to the Bloc Québécois and that was brought to me again yesterday. I was in the Magdalen Islands, and some seniors came to see me to ask about the status of the Bloc Québécois’s request to increase the old age security pension for seniors aged 65 to 74. This would cost just over $3 billion per year and would be good for our seniors, whose purchasing power has been eroded and who are not always in a position to earn more. What is my colleague’s position on our request?”
Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
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Claims 68%Positioning 20%Procedure 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 111 wordswe are here to talk about $20 million that would be allocated from the Department of National Defence and given to a private company.1 As much as I appreciate the member’s concern for seniors, the fact is that if we as an opposition, whether the Bloc Québécois, the NDP, the Greens or the Conservatives, simply talk about anything other than what the government is actually doing, it is taking our money and giving it to a private interest.Unearned certainty There are already signs of huge profits being taken for a company that, a year ago, disclosed to its investors that it was not a going concern, meaning it was close to bankruptcy.2 Positioning · 32 wordsI recognize that under the Liberals, not only are seniors close to bankruptcy but MLS was too. Where did the government choose to put its money in bailing out MLS versus seniors?Positioning Procedure · 20 wordsThat is what we are here to talk about, and that is what I will be talking about here tonight.Procedure

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